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Apparently today is National Post Old Fic day, i.e. I've been going through my writing folder and finding all sorts of things I'd completely forgotten about.

So way back at Christmas I did this fic-request-on-a-card thing and then posted the results. Well... I missed one! So this was originally for [livejournal.com profile] way_too_dorky, who wanted Pin with Ryo somehow involved. Set vaguely in the TAY*J verse, but you definitely don't need to have read that to understand this.

Here is the quote from the original fic that this plays off of:
Ryo was home when Yamapi called, anyway, so it didn't matter. (Jin was almost disappointed. He'd been looking forward to seeing Ryo's face when he came home to find Jin and Pi crashing on his couch, watching his TV, snacking on his snacks. Oh well - he would just have to remember it for next time.)



Jin had secretly been waiting for exactly this opportunity for ages, so when he and Yamapi arrived at Ryo's apartment and Ryo wasn't home, they immediately went to find the concierge. When Ryo got home, they were camped out in front of the television with Ryo's brand new PS3, a mountain of snacks, and the delicious glow of accomplishment.

"What the fuck," said Ryo, dropping his bag.

"Hey, Ryo," Yamapi said, without taking his eyes from the screen. "You weren't home, so we let ourselves in."

"You – you – " Jin was treated to the rare sight of Ryo actually speechless. "How long have you been here?"

Yamapi paused the game and they looked at each other. "An hour?" Jin guessed. "Maybe two?"

"You've been in my apartment, unsupervised, for two hours," Ryo repeated. "What did you break."

"We didn't break anything!" Jin said, making wounded eyes at Ryo. "We were totally responsible. All we did was play Metal Gear Solid, once we found the extra controller."

Ryo narrowed his eyes. "Don't try that with me, Akanishi. I’m smarter than you. What did you do before you found the controller?"

They shared a grin. Yamapi turned to smirk at Ryo. "Sure you want to know?"

"What the hell do you – Jesus Christ," said Ryo. "You – where? What did you touch? I'm fucking sterilizing it right now, you assholes."

"Aw, come on, Ryo," Jin said, trying to suppress a betraying grin. "It wasn't that bad, just - "

"If you touched my couch," Ryo said from between clenched teeth, "I will kill you both. Do you understand me."

Jin couldn't keep it up any longer. He burst into giggles. That set Yamapi off and soon both of them were lying on the floor, laughing so hard they could barely move as Ryo stared at them.

"Ryo," Yamapi gasped, "Ryo, the look on your face – "

The look on Ryo's face was murderous. It only made Jin laugh harder. "I hate you," Ryo said. "I hate you more than anything I've ever hated, are you listening to me?"

"He doesn't approve of our relationship," Jin said woefully to Yamapi. "He said he accepted us for who we were, but he doesn't like it."

"I didn't say any crap about 'accepting' anyone," Ryo said witheringly. "I said at least this way neither of you will have any children to spread your stupidity to. And what I don't like is the thought of you making out on my couch!"

"I don't think that's it," Yamapi stage whispered. "I think – " he looked at Ryo furtively, " – I think he's jealous."

“I'm what?

Jin threw his arms around Yamapi. "I don’t care," he announced. "I'm not sharing with anyone! Tell me if he tries anything, okay?"

Yamapi smiled and nodded happily.

Ryo looked like he wanted to to take them apart with his bare hands.

Jin thought victory had never tasted so sweet.

Date: 2007-09-16 06:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wintersjuly.livejournal.com
I AM NINJA AND FIRST. XP

Date: 2007-09-16 06:31 am (UTC)
ext_20958: (. . .)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
have I told you lately that I love you. XD

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Date: 2007-09-16 06:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wintersjuly.livejournal.com
also, i wasn't planning on saying anything intelligent, since you know how much i love you and this anyway ♥ ♥ ♥

Date: 2007-09-16 06:32 am (UTC)
ext_20958: (thumbs up)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
who needs intelligence? NOT JIN. or me. obviously. ♥ ♥ ♥

Date: 2007-09-16 06:31 am (UTC)
ilanala: Akihabara@deep (thumbs up)
From: [personal profile] ilanala
Ryo torture is my favorite thing ever, especially when Pin is involved. This is beautiful.

Date: 2007-09-16 06:33 am (UTC)
ext_20958: (thumbs up)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
Oh man, writing Ryo has never been anything but pure, undiluted joy for me. XDD Thanks!

Date: 2007-09-16 06:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] swtjemz.livejournal.com
hahaha. Pin torturing Ryo is entirely too amusing. hehehehe


thumbsup

Date: 2007-09-16 07:01 am (UTC)
ext_20958: (KOYAMA IS NINJA)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
ahaha thank you! that is what I have always felt. XD

Date: 2007-09-16 08:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kingmiyoung.livejournal.com
We were totally responsible.

hmmmm, if they used protection, it sounds like they did a little more than making out! poor Ryo; I guess his brain couldn't take the smuttier possibilities. XD;;;

Date: 2007-09-16 03:17 pm (UTC)
ext_20958: (. . .)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
oh that is exactly what they meant. Ryo couldn't bring himself to say it, yes. XD;;

Date: 2007-09-16 09:53 am (UTC)
ext_32263: (misc // ninja rocky)
From: [identity profile] darlita.livejournal.com
Oh Colt this is so wonderful askdöahsdlkjgsaldgasd
*BREAKS A RIB*

I LOVE IS SO MUCH WHEN PIN HARRASS RYO LAKDLAJGDBAJGDAJGDGJ LKADGADLGA. And obviously Yamapi would decide in the end that Ryo's jealous lsadhasld obviously. DYINGGGGG.

ILU ♥

Date: 2007-09-16 03:18 pm (UTC)
ext_20958: (1/3 OF THREE NINJAS)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
HAHAHAHAHA ROCKY I WAS HOPING YOU WOULD LIKE IT <3 <3 <3

ilu back. of course. ♥

Date: 2007-09-16 11:22 am (UTC)
ext_57304: ($ smiling for a reason)
From: [identity profile] mananeh.livejournal.com
They're so mean to Ryo, bless 'em.

...and he hasn't seen the kitchen yet. I bet they cooked. Eeevil.

Date: 2007-09-16 03:19 pm (UTC)
ext_20958: (i finally have a pin icon!)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
I totally thought about putting that in and had to leave it out for space reasons. XD

Date: 2007-09-16 03:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pixisticks.livejournal.com
TAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY*J~ *sees title, immediately lunges*

WHY DON'T PEOPLE USE THAT NAME MORE OFTEN. D: IT'S SO MUCH COOLER THAN PIN. AKSHGALSKGHALK. *is adamant that TAY*J is like the best Pin fic ever*

Date: 2007-09-16 03:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pixisticks.livejournal.com
Maybe it would have been a better idea to comment AFTER I read this. (I remember that part, WHEE)

To Ryo: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *points and laughs*

Ah, RyoPin. I love them. XD

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Date: 2007-09-16 03:56 pm (UTC)
ina: (Jin - excellence -by lelola)
From: [personal profile] ina
Total love!

Date: 2007-09-16 04:01 pm (UTC)
ext_20958: (i finally have a pin icon!)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
♥ thank you!

Date: 2007-09-16 06:14 pm (UTC)
ext_30546: (scha~denfreude!)
From: [identity profile] spurious.livejournal.com
Ryo!torture = THUMBS UP. This is hilarious. ♥

Date: 2007-09-16 09:13 pm (UTC)
ext_20958: (AKAFUU DA)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
heheheheh thank you <3 <3 <3 there is nothing more fun. XD
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Date: 2007-09-16 09:54 pm (UTC)
ext_20958: (squishy faces)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
karen ilusm~ <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Date: 2007-09-16 11:15 pm (UTC)
ext_30559: (嵐;; ♥!!)
From: [identity profile] fluttering.livejournal.com
oh, poor Ryo ♥

The Japanese police could so use Pin as a method of torturing criminals into confession. XD XD

I like fics that start with TAY*J :-*

Date: 2007-09-17 01:20 am (UTC)
ext_20958: (squishy faces)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
HAHAHAHA that would be an interesting scenario. XDD If nothing else, the idiocy would be so contagious they'd confess without knowing what they were doing. XD

heeee. I'm rather fond of them myself. ♥

Date: 2007-09-17 03:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] matchynishi.livejournal.com
You are one of the few writers I will willingly read Pin for! Because you make Jin so adorable alfawoeirsfms ILU JIN. :x

Date: 2007-09-17 03:15 am (UTC)
ext_20958: (sleepyhead)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
awww, thank you! I know what that means and I appreciate it. XDD basically my overflowing Jin love spills into all my fics - so they come out a little one sided, but hey. obviously I am not alone. ♥ ♥

Date: 2007-09-17 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hungry-worm.livejournal.com
*LOVES* :D

Date: 2007-09-17 08:39 pm (UTC)
ext_20958: (thumbs up)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
*loves back!*

Date: 2007-09-18 11:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ginzarhapsody.livejournal.com
The image of Ryo just standing there, its so real and the stupidity in the air is absolutely tangible. *giggle*

Loved it. *hearts*

Date: 2007-09-19 12:33 am (UTC)
ext_20958: (squishy faces)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
Hee hee, thank you! ♥ Poor Ryo, he doesn't deserve this kind of abuse. XD

Date: 2007-09-19 02:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mousapelli.livejournal.com
ah! new tay*j snippet! *loves all over it*

I love how dorky and sweet Jin and Pi are together, and how well Ryo knows that they are dangerous and get sex and hearts all over the carpet. Yay!

Date: 2007-09-19 05:10 am (UTC)
ext_20958: (PIN IS SO MUCH FREAKIN' LOVE)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
♥ thank you! always happy to hear someone loves their dorky lovable combo just like I do. :D

You'd think now that Jin's back and all I'd move on from this particular set-up since it's not exactly necessary, but it will probably stick with me as long as I'm in this particular fandom. Old habits being hard to break and all. *g*

Date: 2007-09-24 08:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yuna-chan10.livejournal.com
TAY*J!!!!!!! *loves all over it* OMG I was so happy when I saw it was TAY*J gdtrnrdubrvdtrbbv I just love this, it's too funny. When I read the snippet you quoted at the beginning when I actually red the fic I thought, 'I wish there would be a fic about that' and here it is!!! YAY! You get incoherence and love as a prize. Oh, and this too: hbgftrdvtrbvksevbaevgtbisuy. ILUSM!!!! <3

Date: 2007-09-24 09:41 pm (UTC)
ext_20958: (TAY*J)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
Hahaha, excellent! Yes, I'd wanted to write this scenario in the original story but let it go for space reasons, so when someone requested TAY*J + Pin of course I jumped all over that. *g* <333

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Date: 2007-10-08 10:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misspalliser.livejournal.com
Awwwww this is mental yet lovely and I have just read the whole Tay*J stuff and am now all "like, when are they going to get back to their PROPER unit and end this NEWS and Kat-Tun part-timey stuff", oh I love them so much aieeee haha (write more of this)! Hope you don't mind the comment!! :) O Jin O Yamapi O Ryo haha chaaaaaaa. Farewell sanity hello secret handshakes.

Date: 2007-10-08 11:45 pm (UTC)
ext_20958: (PIN IS SO MUCH FREAKIN' LOVE)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
Ahaha no no no I love comments! Thank you so much! :D I am very glad you like it and I secretly wish they would go back to their REAL unit, too. ♥

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Date: 2007-10-08 10:47 pm (UTC)

Date: 2007-10-08 11:50 pm (UTC)
ext_20958: (i finally have a pin icon!)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
*BEAMS* THANK YOU!

Date: 2007-10-11 04:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lelola.livejournal.com
This has, without a doubt, made my day.

Ryo's reaction is priceless. XD

Date: 2007-10-12 01:22 am (UTC)
ext_20958: (PIN IS SO MUCH FREAKIN' LOVE)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
HAHAHA Ryo, Ryo, Ryo. He's just so much fun to tease! I am glad you liked it. XD

Date: 2009-07-16 01:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aya-3003.livejournal.com
Even after reading it a second, third, forth time, it's still great. *_*

Date: 2009-07-22 12:40 am (UTC)
ext_20958: (:D :D :D)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
Aw, thanks so much! :)

Date: 2010-01-03 05:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brighterlove.livejournal.com
This Fic had Me ROTKMLMAO! this was priceless

Date: 2010-01-04 04:20 am (UTC)
ext_20958: (i finally have a pin icon!)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
Hee, thank you, glad you enjoyed! :D

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Date: 2010-05-07 02:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sapphireyuuki13.livejournal.com
Kyaaaaa XD!
What a super cute fic XD!
Luv it so much *heart heart heart*
Well, do u mind if i translate this oneshot into my language? It's too cute so make me wanna share XD.
Plz reply me if u cant accept my request X3.

Date: 2010-05-10 06:15 am (UTC)
ext_20958: (jin's smile)
From: [identity profile] acchikocchi.livejournal.com
Awww, thank you so much! :D Please feel free to translate! All I ask is that you link back to the original fic and that you leave me a link to the translation so that I can add it to my list of fics. :)

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