MOO LIKE STOLE EVERYTHING I WANTED TO SAY, BUT I WILL MAKE DO BY PICKING OUT LINES AND FLAILING AT YOU, YES.
THIS IS INTELLIGENT COMMENTARY, SHUT UP.
"No, it's…" Take let the sentence trail away. He was getting that wistful look on his face again, the one that always made Hayato’s stomach twist because of what it meant.
;_;
"Don't bother a sleeping person," Hayato said in an undertone.
Hyuga snorted. "Do you usually sleep with your eyes open – "
i love hayato's brand of logic. no, i really do ♥ ♥ ♥
Of all the ways he’d thought (hadn’t thought) it might (wouldn’t) happen –
It only took him a second to regain his composure. He kissed back, hard and brutal and biting, and Hayato pressed forward, flattening Ryu against the wall with his whole body.
Ryu shrugged his shoulders again, working an arm free, and twisted a hand roughly in Hayato’s impossibly soft hair. Hayato growled and nipped at Ryu’s lower lip, fingers dropping to dig into Ryu’s hips.
jesus christ mer. break my heart and then make them make out hotly against a wall and then break my heart again.
Hayato was trembling. There was a bruise at the corner of his mouth, and he clenched and unclenched his fists, helplessly. Ryu realized, with dull shock, that Hayato was about to cry.
THIS IS THE PART WHERE I CRIED AND CRIED AND CRIED.
AND CRIED.
JUST SO YOU KNOW.
They walked down the hill to the parking lot side by side, elbows bumping, just like any day during high school, and it was then that Hayato finally realized even the silence had changed.
...I DO A LOT OF CRYING IN THIS. i loved this part. they're uncomfortable, changed, different people now, but they try so hard and they keep missing the point. oh boys ;_;
AND I LOVED EVERY LINE OF THE LAST ONE - ESPECIALLY WHEN HAYATO'S SO PLEASED WITH MAKING RYU SMILE. AND I LOVE YOU BUT YOU KNEW THAT.
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Date: 2007-10-09 05:13 am (UTC)THIS IS INTELLIGENT COMMENTARY, SHUT UP.
"No, it's…" Take let the sentence trail away. He was getting that wistful look on his face again, the one that always made Hayato’s stomach twist because of what it meant.
;_;
"Don't bother a sleeping person," Hayato said in an undertone.
Hyuga snorted. "Do you usually sleep with your eyes open – "
i love hayato's brand of logic. no, i really do ♥ ♥ ♥
Of all the ways he’d thought (hadn’t thought) it might (wouldn’t) happen –
It only took him a second to regain his composure. He kissed back, hard and brutal and biting, and Hayato pressed forward, flattening Ryu against the wall with his whole body.
Ryu shrugged his shoulders again, working an arm free, and twisted a hand roughly in Hayato’s impossibly soft hair. Hayato growled and nipped at Ryu’s lower lip, fingers dropping to dig into Ryu’s hips.
jesus christ mer. break my heart and then make them make out hotly against a wall and then break my heart again.
Hayato was trembling. There was a bruise at the corner of his mouth, and he clenched and unclenched his fists, helplessly. Ryu realized, with dull shock, that Hayato was about to cry.
THIS IS THE PART WHERE I CRIED AND CRIED AND CRIED.
AND CRIED.
JUST SO YOU KNOW.
They walked down the hill to the parking lot side by side, elbows bumping, just like any day during high school, and it was then that Hayato finally realized even the silence had changed.
...I DO A LOT OF CRYING IN THIS. i loved this part. they're uncomfortable, changed, different people now, but they try so hard and they keep missing the point. oh boys ;_;
AND I LOVED EVERY LINE OF THE LAST ONE - ESPECIALLY WHEN HAYATO'S SO PLEASED WITH MAKING RYU SMILE. AND I LOVE YOU BUT YOU KNEW THAT.