what i really liked was the easiness of the whole story, even with all that tension. i think it was the setting? the nature, the whole hike, and maybe kame and jin being normal people.
it felt really real and, your story didn't really have an end. (bcoz the best stories never really have an end.) it just stopped there, and i was like "what?" and then a sudden realisation.
"Oh."
sweetie i'm adding this to mems. :) write more~ (a part two for this would be great acty! haha)
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Date: 2009-01-07 07:28 am (UTC)what i really liked was the easiness of the whole story, even with all that tension. i think it was the setting? the nature, the whole hike, and maybe kame and jin being normal people.
it felt really real and, your story didn't really have an end. (bcoz the best stories never really have an end.) it just stopped there, and i was like "what?" and then a sudden realisation.
"Oh."
sweetie i'm adding this to mems. :) write more~ (a part two for this would be great acty! haha)