I really like that you decided to write about the others and who you picked. Takki's was so heart breaking. I really love all the little tid bits that make it more real, like the thing with the ratings and the description of Jin's living room.
You have a real talent to ground the fics into reality, that happens so seldom in JE fics and I appreciate it so much. That makes it certainly harder to write, but makes them stand out so much.
And the story is sad, but in a "so is life" way that it is just more awesome that way. I am in love with this. ♥
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Date: 2008-03-22 09:29 am (UTC)I really like that you decided to write about the others and who you picked. Takki's was so heart breaking. I really love all the little tid bits that make it more real, like the thing with the ratings and the description of Jin's living room.
You have a real talent to ground the fics into reality, that happens so seldom in JE fics and I appreciate it so much. That makes it certainly harder to write, but makes them stand out so much.
And the story is sad, but in a "so is life" way that it is just more awesome that way. I am in love with this. ♥