Yay! Congrats on finishing, honey! :) It's so, so good to see new fic from you. :)
I love everything: how real each piece feels - you know I love realistic stories, and you deliver beautifully. :) I also love what you don't say, and the sadness you convey that seems so much a part of the dynamic between any relationship between Hayato and Ryu...although I do wonder what might happen from the end of the last piece, because it's the only one in which they seem to have a hope at becoming friends on more of an equal footing.
I love stories that make me want more, and you've definitely written that! :D ♥
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Date: 2007-10-08 02:00 am (UTC)I love everything: how real each piece feels - you know I love realistic stories, and you deliver beautifully. :) I also love what you don't say, and the sadness you convey that seems so much a part of the dynamic between any relationship between Hayato and Ryu...although I do wonder what might happen from the end of the last piece, because it's the only one in which they seem to have a hope at becoming friends on more of an equal footing.
I love stories that make me want more, and you've definitely written that! :D ♥