Oh my goodness this is brilliant. The best Raul/Alvaro I've ever read, adding his to my memories to read again tomorrow.
I absolutely love your style of writing, it's so... flowing, it all fits together.
Your Raul is exactly how I imagine him to be, I love the humour, and the goofiness that you portray him with. I love how he knows everything bt nothing at the same time, he's adorable and deals with Alvaro like I imagine only he could :)
Alvaro is awesome, a little thick at times but he knows what he's doing. When he called Silva I was like, what? Raul really likes you what's he asking David for? But then I got it. Also, I like the fact that he didn't want to say that their 'thing' was 'something' but they both knew it was but blah, I'm rambling, no?
Anyways, just wanted to say that this is awesome and thank you so so much for writing this :)
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Date: 2011-08-04 09:13 pm (UTC)I absolutely love your style of writing, it's so... flowing, it all fits together.
Your Raul is exactly how I imagine him to be, I love the humour, and the goofiness that you portray him with. I love how he knows everything bt nothing at the same time, he's adorable and deals with Alvaro like I imagine only he could :)
Alvaro is awesome, a little thick at times but he knows what he's doing. When he called Silva I was like, what? Raul really likes you what's he asking David for? But then I got it. Also, I like the fact that he didn't want to say that their 'thing' was 'something' but they both knew it was but blah, I'm rambling, no?
Anyways, just wanted to say that this is awesome and thank you so so much for writing this :)