This was fucking sensational. You took a fic that I really only wrote to play for comedy, and you drew out all of these elements that I hadn't really seen myself -- the scene with Takki was heartbreaking, and perfect, and just. Just. I am absolutely stunned, I really am.
I loved the way that you wrote Jin's other conquests -- I hadn't intended those to be the ones, but I now can't see it any other way! That was a fantastic lead-in, and it just made it feel...so tense when it came to Tego, and the tension between Yamapi and Jin.
(Yamapi sleeping with Tego is really hot, also.)
But oh GOD, that tension was. Was. Oh God, my heart. ;_; It was incredible. Yamapi, God, it's awful because Jin's not being cruel, he just doesn't feel the same way, and that's almost worse. And Yamapi having a girlfriend who doesn't know, and, and, oh god I have to stop talking, but.
I basically think this is amazing, and I'm so so so SO happy you were given me as an assignment. :D :D :D
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OH. MY. GOD.
This was fucking sensational. You took a fic that I really only wrote to play for comedy, and you drew out all of these elements that I hadn't really seen myself -- the scene with Takki was heartbreaking, and perfect, and just. Just. I am absolutely stunned, I really am.
I loved the way that you wrote Jin's other conquests -- I hadn't intended those to be the ones, but I now can't see it any other way! That was a fantastic lead-in, and it just made it feel...so tense when it came to Tego, and the tension between Yamapi and Jin.
(Yamapi sleeping with Tego is really hot, also.)
But oh GOD, that tension was. Was. Oh God, my heart. ;_; It was incredible. Yamapi, God, it's awful because Jin's not being cruel, he just doesn't feel the same way, and that's almost worse. And Yamapi having a girlfriend who doesn't know, and, and, oh god I have to stop talking, but.
I basically think this is amazing, and I'm so so so SO happy you were given me as an assignment. :D :D :D