http://worldcoup.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] worldcoup.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] acchikocchi 2012-01-03 09:00 am (UTC)

sdkfhsdfksjdfkhsdlkjsdklfjsoiglksldgljsdlksdf COHERENT THOUGHTS ARE HARD FOR ME TO FIND BECAUSE THIS FIC IS SO FUCKING FLAWLESS.

Honestly, everything about it. Zaida is such a fierce female character, and this is the perfect reaction I think of her fierce to dealing with being the daughter of a famous footballer. It's obviously a relationship of love but at the same time there is that resentment- THOUGH DV TRIES HIS HARDEST TOO BLESS HIS HEART. Everything about her characterization is strong and bold and her own person and yet like her father and kldfjksdf PERFECT.

AND THE TRANSFORMATION OF THEIR RELATIONSHIP WAS SO, SO SATISFYING. It was exactly the relationship they're supposed to have: unrelenting and competitive and fierce and yet loving and understanding. It's flawless.

THIS FIC I CANNOT DEAL SDOFJ:LSDFS:DLFSDGJS:LDG.

Also. Where is the DS-filled version of this? :P

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