ext_189749 ([identity profile] nahco3.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] acchikocchi 2011-09-16 12:07 am (UTC)

I want a sequel. XD

but but MORE SUBSTANTIVELY (maybe?) you wrote this not me because you know a brilliant idea when you see one, and also because my goal in life is to read as much fic my you as possible, which mean I need to manipulate you into writing for me.

about the fic:

1. cousins are always funny. this is a fact.
2. also so is Sergio Ramos on twitter.
3. I love that you manage to make Leo and Cris so cute and real and well-characterized inside the WEB OF CRAZY around them.
4. djfldkjflkf the Pep/Mou scene is maybe the best part
4a. especially the Coldplay.
4b. and the depressed Bojan.
4c. and the fact that Jose has talked to Leo about his feelings.
5. I think the only way to save Spanish football at this point is drunk bowling.
6. I LOVE YOU AND YOUR WRITING SO MUCH. I feel like I can't say that enough. you just like BRIGHTEN MY LIFE SO MUCH.

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