I so, so agree with you on this! I know you like angst!Pin fic, and I think you conveyed a slice of conflict here that really worked with them. I'm sort of working on a rough, edgy Pin fic right now and it's really refreshing, I think. Pin are dorky, let's face it, but they've admitted that they're so stubborn that they fight a lot, and that side doesn't get explored nearly enough. :)